Restaurant Social Media Hooks: What to Say in the First Line
Short answer
The first line decides whether anyone keeps watching. The ones that hold people do one thing: give a concrete fact immediately. "These prawns came in at six this morning" holds; "Welcome to our restaurant" does not. Avoid opening with a question.
Who this is for
Restaurants and cafés already posting clips that get swiped away in the first three seconds.
Steps
- Find the fact: a time, a number, a price, a limit. The more specific the better.
- Put only that fact in the first line. No shop name, no "hi everyone".
- The second line is where you say why it matters to the viewer.
- Match the first frame to the first line. If you say prawns, show prawns — not the shopfront.
- After three posts, compare which held people, and reuse that opening shape.
Example output
Weak: "Hi everyone, welcome to our restaurant." Better: "This pot has been on since five this morning."
First lines you can adapt
Swap the brackets for your own facts. Each one is a fact, not a greeting:
- Time: "This broth has been on since [5 a.m.]."
- Count: "Only [30] of these go out each day."
- Limit: "Weekends only. Gone by [2 p.m.]."
- Price: "[S$6.50] for the full plate, rice included."
- Process: "Every noodle here is pulled by hand."
- Origin: "The durian came in from [Raub] this morning."
- Change: "New on the menu from [Monday]."
- Regulars: "The order our regulars ask for first."
Pick the one that is true for you today. If none are true, use the time it was made. That one is always true.
Match the first frame to the first line
The words and the picture have to say the same thing in the first second.
| First line | First frame |
|---|---|
| "This broth has been on since 5 a.m." | Steam rising from the pot, close up |
| "Only 30 of these go out each day." | Hands placing the last few on the tray |
| "New on the menu from Monday." | The dish being set down on the table |
If the first frame is your shopfront, a logo or a wide shot of the dining room, people swipe before the line lands.
What loses people in the first three seconds
- A logo or intro animation before anything happens.
- A slow shot of the shopfront.
- Music with no words and no clear subject.
- Text too small to read on a phone.
- "Hi everyone" or the shop name as the first thing said.
How to test two hooks without making two videos
Use the same clip twice, a week apart, with a different first line each time. In your app's analytics, check how many people stayed past the first few seconds. Keep the opening that held more people, and try a new one against it next week.
What ThinkNova does
ThinkNova puts the fact you type at the front — it will not pad the opening with a greeting. Whatever fact you give becomes the first line. New accounts get free credits.
FAQ
Can I open with a question?
Better not. A question asks for thought; a fact does not.
What if nothing special happened?
Times and counts always exist: when it was made, how many a day, how many left.
How long should the hook be?
One line, under three seconds when read aloud.
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Want to see it across many kinds of shop? This video shows 30 small shops made on ThinkNova (AI platform demo): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HNZ9J0RvyNs